• EvilNinjadude

    Creepy lighting always helps setting up suspense. Don't blame you for using it.

  • EvilNinjadude

    …why do all the girls have extreme abs in this bonus comic?

    • http://yosh.katbox.net Sage

      Because of the Olympics. But seriously, I've been working on defining more muscle tone to keep the anatomy more solid. A few of the girls I've wanted to be more toned. Nami has a pretty toned body though she's kind of a smaller girl. Kate is not a tiny girl and she's not highly toned but she still has an athletic build. Blue is a similar body type but she's a bit more active with her figure. Lien has little to no toning, she's made to look nonthreatening in build. I went a little too detailed on some of them but I think they still turned out nice.

      • Jerohan

        Ya won't hear any complaints from me.
        I've always had a thing for… *ahem* athetic women with a bit o' msucle…
        …
        …
        Ok, and with alot of msucle. Sue me.
        In any case, awesome job, Phil, as always. Wonder if we get to see any classical creepy ghosy stuff, like shadow figres. That would be nice.

      • EvilNinjadude

        It's okay if it's just meant to develop the way their bodies look using art… it's just that it looks a little exaggerated here. It's like they spent the first half of their holiday doing nothing but situps, or something crazy like that.

  • AeonsShadow

    Agreed, they did turn out nice. Love the tendrils of darkness there by the way. |D

    They seem to remind me of a certain dark prince whom I haven't seen in a while?

    Probably just my imagination. |D

    Anyways, I love your work as always. All of your characters are fleshing out nicely if they hadn't been fully fleshed before, and the new more detailed design gives them all a unique look~!

  • Newker

    Her arms are being smished :) come on let them finish you stupid lighting

  • Felix The Line Walker

    I think your 'test run' of the extra body detailing on the characters mentioned so far has worked rather nicely (How you got the time to play about with this is beyond me…)! Anyway… keep up the cool work as always Sage!

  • http://yosh.katbox.net/archive/yosh-island-adventure-12/ Carbuncle

    i like the toning results you tried out so far loving all of it

  • Rock

    They are so mean to her… ^^;

  • Aye-non-eee-moose

    I feel the toning is a bit too… solid? I guess? On their abdomens. While their arms are indistinct. Blue, in the first panel there, doesn't apparently have any muscle on her upper arm, while she's got a chest-plate for a stomach.

    My druthers would be for the arms to get only slightly better defined, while the stomach-toning gets scaled back quite a bit. I like soft. :P

    • http://yosh.katbox.net Sage

      Yep, I gotta make the toning look more subtle, it's a bit tricky but I'll figure out something that works ^_^

    • EvilNinjadude

      I approve this comment.

  • Zoie Falcona

    Very nice though I'd probably recommend just like with the arms, use light/shadow to define the stomach muscles like you did with the arms.

  • Bucc-i

    Yeah! Nami has normal abs now! Earlier in this bonus comic, her abs just looked… weird.

  • Stephen

    i'd say threesome but then i would sound like a perv. …THREESOME!

  • Blackshadow

    So any reason these girls have like eight packs?

    • http://yosh.katbox.net Sage

      Kinda already answered that except, 8? Please see a doctor, you may be experiencing double vision.

    • EvilNinjadude

      Vertical double vision ftw.

  • Mr. Al

    Gotta love blu+michelle^.^

  • EvilNinjadude

    This needs more bonus comic. Or more convention. You, go donate. Read more on the forums. Read the rest of the comic.

    Or go outside. Another good thing you can do.

  • biblioholic

    Sorry…

    so distracted with the abbs that are in no way accompanied by ANY OTHER VISIBLE MUSCLE MASS

    • ravor9933

      I know right?

  • barrage7667

    You can have good abs without much other muscle mass. A lot of girls actually try to do it that way to make themselves look good without making their arms or legs bulky. It all depends on the work out you do. Also, 2 of them are robots so really, they look how they were designed. If you have a proportion complaint complain about the incredibly large boobs.

    • Huginn612

      Why are you guys complaining at all? Enjoy the comic, think of it as a gift, courtesy of Sage.

    • ravor9933

      Actually they can grow and change subtly over time and by that logic gain muscle mass; am I right Sage

  • Bane

    I just caught up on this bonus comic, I have to say Sage, you have improved remarkably since your start, and even since recently. I am really enjoying the main story as well. Keep up the good work :D !